Sea of Blood

Jun 21, 2018 21:49
Sea of Blood

Around 4:30 am today, I woke up because of feeling uncomfortable.

I was sleeping on my face down, and I felt that something dropped from my nose.

I thought "Ah, my nose is running," but when I saw my bedding, I found that there is a sea of blood.

A lot of blood flowed from my nose.

While becoming so depressed, I wiped off the blood on my bedding by using a wet towel repeatedly.

After I dried my bedding, I fell asleep again with a feeling of weariness.

The cause might be that I ate dinner at 11:00 pm yesterday -- eating food late at night increases your blood pressure.
血の海

今日、朝4時半頃、私は違和感を感じて目を覚ましました。

うつ伏せになった体勢で、鼻から何かが垂れ落ちる感覚がしたのです。

「鼻水をたらしてしまったか」と思い、拭こうと思って布団を見ると、血の海ができていました。

大量の鼻血を出していたのです。

すごく憂鬱な気分になりながら、タオルを何度もお湯につけ、布団についた血を拭き取りました。

布団をドライヤーで乾かしたあとは、疲れてまた寝てしまいました。

昨日、よる11時に晩ごはんを食べて、血圧が上がったのが原因かもしれません。
No. 1 Sammy's correction
  • Around 4:30 am today, I woke up because of feeling uncomfortable.
  • Around 4:30 am today, I woke up because of an uncomfortable feeling.
  • I was sleeping on my face down, and I felt that something dropped from my nose.
  • I was sleeping with my face down and felt that something dropping from my nose.
  • I thought "Ah, my nose is running," but when I saw my bedding, I found that there is a sea of blood.
  • I thought, "Ah, my nose is running," but when I saw my bedding, I found that there is a sea of blood.
  • A lot of blood flowed from my nose.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • While becoming so depressed, I wiped off the blood on my bedding by using a wet towel repeatedly.
  • While becoming so depressed, I wiped off the blood off my bedding by using a wet towel repeatedly.
  • After I dried my bedding, I fell asleep again with a feeling of weariness.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • The cause might be that I ate dinner at 11:00 pm yesterday -- eating food late at night increases your blood pressure.
  • It might be because I ate dinner at 11:00 pm yesterday -- eating food late at night increases your blood pressure.
I hope you're okay!
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
Sammy
You're welcome!!
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